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失敗乃成功之母。本卷閱讀理解B部分文章討論了失敗對于獲取成功具有重要的價值。請你根據(jù)下面提示，寫一篇英語短文，談?wù)勀闳绾谓梃bApple的成功經(jīng)驗，采取有效行動，變失敗為成功。
寫作要點：
1. What have you learned from Apple's story?
2. Have you ever experienced a failure?
What was it?
3. What will you do to turn it into a success?
要求：
1. 短文應(yīng)包括提示中所有的寫作要點，條理清晰，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮：
2. 短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名和地名：
3. 詞數(shù)不少于80。
分析：
內(nèi)容：敘述失敗的故事，采取怎樣的行動，化失敗為成功
時態(tài)：敘述部分，一般過去時（主要）；議論部分，一般現(xiàn)在時，一般將來時。注意看問句的時態(tài)
易錯詞匯：failure 不可數(shù)，失敗；可數(shù)，失敗的人或事。success 不可數(shù)，成功；可數(shù)，成功的人或事
閱讀理解B部分關(guān)于Apple的故事總結(jié)：
蘋果手機有缺陷，銷量不好，喬布斯心有執(zhí)念，尋找改善方法，最終走向成功
關(guān)鍵詞：failure, believed in, successful
可借鑒之處：
1. 有信心，不放棄（belief）
2. 尋求解決辦法（action）
Para.1 總結(jié)
① From Apple's story, I have learned that success doesn't come naturally and it requires strong belief and effective action.
② I have learned that failure is valuable, which may lead to success sooner or later if we make full use of it.
③ I have learned that we should never give up when facing difficulties in our daily life
Para.2 敘述失敗經(jīng)歷
1. 過渡：
① It reminds me of my own experience.
② It brings back my own experience.
2. 敘事：
交代時間、事件
① There was a time when ~
② When I was ten, ~
③ At the age of ~
④ During ~
交代結(jié)果
① I didn't ~
② I failed to ~
③ Since then, I have ~
Para.3 行動（重點）
① I will do my best to ~
② I will improve the method of ~
③ I decide to do ~
④ I make every effort to do ~
范文：
After reading the passage, I have learned that success doesn't come naturally and it requires strong belief and effective action.
The story brings back a failure of mine. To celebrate Mother's Day, I made an attempt to cook a meal for my mom. To my sadness, it ended up with failure because the food was either salty or spicy. Since then, I haven't cooked a second meal.
However, Steve Jobs' story encourages me to face the failure correctly. At first, I should believe in myself and never give up. Only if so will I take action to improve my cooking skills. Besides, I decide to try more times to make the food more delicious, as the saying goes, practice makes perfect.
個人感受：
1. 作為學(xué)生，年紀(jì)尚小，經(jīng)歷的失敗大多是考試失利。個人認(rèn)為在考場寫作時能夠規(guī)避“爛大街”的內(nèi)容，盡量規(guī)避，當(dāng)然前提是這樣做時間夠，可以保證分更高。
2. 借鑒蘋果的經(jīng)驗，采取有效行動是重點。
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